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The seven commandments were a set of rules that the pigs made to keep the farm running smoothly, but it turned out that the pigs couldn’t even follow them themselves. They ended up changing them slightly over time to suit themselves, for example, “No animal shall drink alcohol.” Became “No animal shall drink alcohol to excess.” And ‘No animal shall sleep in a bed” Changed to “No animal shall sleep in a bed, with sheets.” These are just some examples of how he has started to change from the start. These are considered changes because at the start, he wanted to be like Old Major, but he would never do this, he would always put the farm over himself, and Napoleon is being selfish instead of caring for the farm.

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Remember you are answering a question about how a single character changed. This is really good work Jack just remember to keep focusing on bringing it back to how the character you’ve chosen has changed. Also make sure you include the Your opinion part of your essay as well. Add in some information about the writer’s purpose/intention and make a connection to the outside world. Good work Jack!

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